Tuesday, November 11, 2008

I want that day and Iwant that in my way

I am waiting for the day and I want that in my way,
I want to stand strong and you accept yourself wrong.

I have only one desire that every one admire,
that my beard is a mane and I never wanted an aero plane.

But I dreamed of a thing, to fly I should have wing,
I live with the theme I should swim against the stream.

But I was a child and you were very wild,
I felt a gun on head and ran till I was dead.

My wings could never grow and life for me was sorrow,
I was trapped in stream, I had my broken dream.

I was standing in rain and you never understood that pain,
My hopes were getting thin, who is responsible for that sin?

These all things u did when I was a small kid,
I always hid, when I was a small kid.

I lost confidence to try and neither could I cry,
but inside it was humid when I was a small kid.

But I never broke down cause for her I dreamed of a crown,
I never showed my anger because I would look like a bagger.

Standing on shore I dreamed something more,
that thing provided me new soul and I tried to fill the inside hole.

My destiny is revenge and this should not change,
my dream was new and this is how I grew.

I could see a new ray and waiting for my day,
I am waiting for the day and I want that in my way.

MAYANK

copyright 2008
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10 comments:

Vivek Kulshreshtha said...

That was quite awesome.. I have no doubt you wrote that. My wild bro.

priyadarshi said...

cool..... this one is really poetic......with full of rime.... :)

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darshana said...

This is an especially cool poem because not only it is beautiful ,but it has great depth.

shweta said...

its really awesome dude........
Look like u have some thoughts in ur mind........
Keep it up....
And plz stop vanishing ur creatitivity in all those useless things........

Unknown said...

its fanatastic,nice thoughts u have put..Be optimistic,each thing ll come true one day.......

Saurabh said...

Its Really nice...Wow..u are a poet in ur mind & heart .....I know u can fly...

Vivek Kulshreshtha said...

sahi hai.... sare blogs tareefon wale... jinamain critics tha sab delete kar diye.

Extra effort to make the poem flawless.

Mayank Kulshreshtha said...

hey bhai maine koi blogg delete nahi kiya....saurabh ne mere account se comment daal diyaa tha...so mere naam se gayaa isiliye delete usne khud,,,,aur haan ....i dont even make efforts who the hell has time to make extra